Hollow part 36
I DON’T KNOW ENGLISH VERY WELL. I JUST WANT TO IMPROVE IT.
I’M NOT A WRITER.
IF YOU SAW A MISTAKE, LET ME KNOW.
She stood on the ramp, waiting for a command to enter the train.
“Move!” There was a sharp sound over her head and standing in front of her women went forward.
She was harried to a goods wagon. She sat in the corner, watching entering women. When the last one came inside, the door was bolted. The wagon was controlled by twilight. Despite the thick wooden walls she heard sound of whistle and soon machine drove onto the rails. First slow, as crane speed up to fly, with each turn of the wheels, the train went faster.
Clatter, clatter, clatter. Regular sound worked like the best sedative.
She didn’t know which time was it, but suddenly she felt very sleepy. She closed her eyes. She dreamed, until suddenly she felt someone’s fingers on her neck. Surprised, she opened her eyes and saw in front of her light, blue eyes. She knew them. They scared her in the carriage. She tried to escape, but without success. She fell over, trying to attract attention. She looked with begging eyes, but nobody reacted. She tried to scream, but sound didn’t want to get out from her throat until finally she felt that she beginning to weaken. Her breath quietened down. Her head tilted. The medallion was ripped of her neck and her cheek hugged to the floor and from the eyes flowed down tears. The last breath of life.